Stanford<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>The vocal delivery makes this, it’s very gentle and loving as if sung to a child. There’s what sounds to me like a movie theme intro and then a heartfelt intimate piece, sung well with some nice instrumentation.<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>The production is very fuzzy, not sure what’s causing that but it would be much better if it was clearer and brighter.The track ends at 3:30 and continues to 4:24 so that’s a minute of silence, I think the whole production needs improving there.The Intro doesn’t really quite sit with the song so it feels like two distinct pieces, I think it could work as the intro with some rearranging but I feel it is also too long.The Intro sounds like the soundtrack to a 30s film, for some reason Somewhere Over the Rainbow comes to mind for me so in that way maybe it matches the lullaby idea. The 2nd part though is more contemporary with the piano and guitar backing, some hammond organ I think etc. That also has some nice changes and parts. There’s some nice heart felt lyrics there but I’m listening hard to hear a hook and not so I’d like the theme to be emphasised for me as a listener.There’s quite a lot of reverb which I think works nicely in the searching the Universe part but overall I think it should have a closer feel. Just an idea.You’ve really got something but for me it’s losing a lot in the production, slight mismatch of the parts and not helping me focus my ear on a hook.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: Russ SteeleSong: Lullaby for JReviewer: StanfordPositive Comments: The vocal delivery makes this, it’s very gentle and loving as if sung to a child. There’s what sounds to me like a movie theme intro and then a heartfelt intimate piece…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-82019","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/82019","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=82019"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/82019\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":82020,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/82019\/revisions\/82020"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=82019"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=82019"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=82019"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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