Tony Tersmette<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>I hear a work in need of further development. The instrument\/patch choices have potential, but there is … [continued below] <\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>… hmmm … The synth patch that opens the piece dominates throughout the work – perhaps use it more sparingly. The change at 1:15 along with piano underneath at about 1:30, deserves further development. What follows, frankly, smacks of chaos. — More attention to melody in general is needed. The string patch’s job, me thinks, but not exclusively so. … a harshness to the piece that the average listener might find hard to take, and this has largely to do with the mix. No rules here (I hate ‘rules’ personally, as there are always examples that work that flout the ‘rules’), but perhaps saving the strongest part of the song for later, or maybe providing a contrasting ‘softer’ section would make it more effective when heard. — I don’t hear clearly defined sections, which can help the listener get a handle on things. I hope this helps. Don’t be discouraged, and keep on writing!! Hey, nobody who is anybody will say this stuff is easy. Best!!!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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