Kate Carpenter<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>“The pieces of you that are living in me” – That’s a clever, original, compelling thought, the hallmark of this song. It’s a dreamer’s song…the singer dreams of places he could see, always coming back. I like the idea of seeing this world through the eyes of heaven…lends a spiritual element to the song. Perhaps “the pieces of you that are living in me” could be God, or another person…lover, parents perhaps? It’s a song that keeps you wondering, and that’s a good thing. Best lyric: Roll up to the castle, stray beyond the green. Take that kind of originality and fly with it. That’s what will make your songs stand out.<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>I thought the intro was a little “blah”…infuse it with a little more wonder…that’s what your song is about, right? That is…if you decide to take this tune to the next level. The part where you sang 2 different things at one time was interesting. I wasn’t sure that I liked it when I listened again, I did like it. However it might sound even better with a female or different person singing with you. Just a thought.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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