{"id":78778,"date":"2021-02-10T19:11:00","date_gmt":"2021-02-11T01:11:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=1f4687dbc3ae0e87085e2fd45cf9de3a"},"modified":"2021-02-10T19:11:00","modified_gmt":"2021-02-11T01:11:00","slug":"amends-by-marc-s-pate-9","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2021\/02\/10\/amends-by-marc-s-pate-9\/","title":{"rendered":"Amends by Marc S. Pate"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"https:\/\/d3ck8ztij7t71z.cloudfront.net\/98\/98561\/tmb_150x150_98561_187068.jpg\" title=\"Marc S. Pate\" alt=\"Marc S. Pate\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/marcpate\">Marc S. Pate<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=68863&#038;mediaID=731225\">Amends<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=129251\">Paul Pierce Project<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>Interesting start to the vocal with what sounds like an octave effect.  I like 1:45 where there is a full break and the song starts to build more. Love the guitar sound.  The overall pallet of musical colors in this song is interesting and engaging, meaning I want to hear more and I&#8217;m invested in this tune. I would like to hear more from you.  Possibly the most interesting thing about it is that it appears to have a time signature that I can&#8217;t figure out! It feels like a 6\/8 but there are extra beats in there!<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>When it hits about 1:00 I think the vocal needs to be going somewhere more. At some point I would have dropped the octave sound of the lead vocal as it starts to become repetitive. The melodic idea should be developed in this song while I feel the song needs a B section or some other place that it should go.  To me, when it gets to the change around 4 minutes, that change happens too late in the song.  OK, so where IS the 1?  As a drummer I&#8217;m stumped. If you asked me to play this song with you, we would spend time counting together till I got it!  lol!  Nice work here though. This song has its own vibe for sure.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Marc S. PateSong: AmendsReviewer: Paul Pierce ProjectPositive Comments: Interesting start to the vocal with what sounds like an octave effect.  I like 1:45 where there is a full break and the song starts to build more. Love the guitar &#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-78778","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/78778","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=78778"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/78778\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":78779,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/78778\/revisions\/78779"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=78778"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=78778"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=78778"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}