John Walradt<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>The first thing that makes a song for me is the melody. The body of the song has a pleasant tune that’s easy to follow, but what really does it is that chorus! It’s hooky and memorable. It works well lyrically, too, telling a soothing story of being together. The easy jingle-jangle guitar gives a pleasant steady background beat. The song has a pleasant progression, starting with voice and guitar, adding more instruments as the tune builds. I could see this being a hit from a movie.<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>First constructive comment: nice job, so have a beer! Next, a couple of personal interpretive ideas to play with: beginning at 2:00, how about decreasing the volume of the claps about 10 percent and maybe the slightest echo to soften them to complement the mood of the lyrical theme? From 2:25 to 2:45, what would you think of a sound less shrill, orchestral strings (but seriously, I’m not saying to make it sound like Mantovani! Just had to say that to poke a little fun at my suggestion!), and maybe soften the vocal at 3:20 like 3:09, but just a little, it doesn’t have to be exact! Of course, you know your tune best. Final comment: you really know how to craft the melodies! I like that!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: Warren HeinSong: Warm And Dry (folk\/rock final revision)Reviewer: John WalradtPositive Comments: The first thing that makes a song for me is the melody. The body of the song has a pleasant tune that’s easy to follow, but what really do…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-77715","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/77715","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=77715"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/77715\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":77719,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/77715\/revisions\/77719"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=77715"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=77715"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=77715"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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