{"id":76710,"date":"2020-11-11T16:45:00","date_gmt":"2020-11-11T22:45:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=00ce0b406a761c4cce05de1ac0f15ed3"},"modified":"2020-11-11T16:45:00","modified_gmt":"2020-11-11T22:45:00","slug":"better-go-by-kathyjo-varco-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2020\/11\/11\/better-go-by-kathyjo-varco-2\/","title":{"rendered":"Better Go by Kathyjo Varco"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"https:\/\/d3ck8ztij7t71z.cloudfront.net\/163\/163731\/tmb_150x150_163731_257318.jpg\" title=\"Kathyjo Varco\" alt=\"Kathyjo Varco\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/kathyjovarco1\">Kathyjo Varco<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=107175&#038;mediaID=675226\">Better Go<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=128316\">Andrea Standley, Songwriter<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>There is a lot going on in this song&#8230;lyrics feel like they run together (perhaps too wordy) and I was listening for a place where the song would &#8220;breathe&#8221;.  However, the hook is in my head, and the melody throughout is really catchy, so something is here.  It&#8217;s not there yet, but it&#8217;s close!  <\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>I&#8217;d work a bit more on the lyrics and find a way to allow the song to &#8220;breathe&#8221; and not feel so lyrically heavy.  Production is good enough to get the feel of the song, which feels good btw, but I&#8217;d suggest a lyric and slight melody re-work with piano and guitar, taking the gist of all your lyrics and cutting them in half OR at least reducing chorus by half.  There is definitely something good here and worth a re-work.  You can talk to Studio Pros who would work with you on this song.  Overall, the feel is fun!  <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Kathyjo VarcoSong: Better GoReviewer: Andrea Standley, SongwriterPositive Comments: There is a lot going on in this song&#8230;lyrics feel like they run together (perhaps too wordy) and I was listening for a place where the song would &#8220;bre&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-76710","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/76710","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=76710"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/76710\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":76711,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/76710\/revisions\/76711"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=76710"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=76710"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=76710"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}