{"id":74684,"date":"2020-08-09T13:48:00","date_gmt":"2020-08-09T18:48:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=3b4d6b7cd50399f179faed14bab200ee"},"modified":"2020-08-09T13:48:00","modified_gmt":"2020-08-09T18:48:00","slug":"i-was-me-and-you-were-you-by-cwmullins","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2020\/08\/09\/i-was-me-and-you-were-you-by-cwmullins\/","title":{"rendered":"I Was Me and You Were You by CWMullins"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"https:\/\/d3ck8ztij7t71z.cloudfront.net\/200\/200814\/tmb_150x150_200814_289879.jpg\" title=\"CWMullins\" alt=\"CWMullins\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/mullini@verizon.net\">CWMullins<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=127603&#038;mediaID=752126\">I Was Me and You Were You<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=27558\">paul sandberg<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>I liked the groove established here.  The lyric are solid and the hook works well.<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>I hate being negative as I know who you are via having reviewed another of your songs &#8211; the same things apply here &#8211; I would sing this the verses of this song in a lower register for starters.  As it stands I feel that the 3rd line of the verses could use a completely different melody, playing off the chord changes instead of adhering to them.&#8221;When I think back&#8221; feels rushed.The guitar solo is pretty weak &#8211; sounds like you were trying to be creative and ended up with no flow or cohesion and some passing notes that didn&#8217;t fit.I would have faded out the song much sooner, as there is a serious breakdown in the bass and the ending is very weak and disjointed.   Once again there are the roots of a very nice song here &#8211; really like the groove to this &#8211; perhaps trying singing this more as a spoken piece and not so sing song with the melody.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: CWMullinsSong: I Was Me and You Were YouReviewer: paul sandbergPositive Comments: I liked the groove established here.  The lyric are solid and the hook works well.Constructive Comments: I hate being negative as I know who you are via &#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-74684","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/74684","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=74684"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/74684\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":74685,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/74684\/revisions\/74685"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=74684"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=74684"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=74684"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}