{"id":73256,"date":"2020-06-24T01:00:00","date_gmt":"2020-06-24T06:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=c234e7c4a9d74ae83eb7c73769142512"},"modified":"2020-06-24T01:00:00","modified_gmt":"2020-06-24T06:00:00","slug":"ive-got-my-telephone-by-bob-birthisel-8","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2020\/06\/24\/ive-got-my-telephone-by-bob-birthisel-8\/","title":{"rendered":"I&#8217;ve Got My Telephone by Bob Birthisel"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"https:\/\/d3ck8ztij7t71z.cloudfront.net\/177\/177744\/tmb_150x150_177744_287771.jpg\" title=\"Bob Birthisel\" alt=\"Bob Birthisel\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/BobBirthisel\">Bob Birthisel<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=126014&#038;mediaID=745538\">I&#8217;ve Got My Telephone<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=127228\">Empty Atlas<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>That keys solo after the first hook is really fantastic &#8211; I&#8217;d listen back for that alone. Another thing I think you did really well is keep your lyrics really centered on the main concept, which isn&#8217;t always the case. I also think your voice is a great fit for the sort of modernized New Wave pop sound, so no complaints on that front.<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>Just full disclosure, I feel like this song may sound older than it&#8217;s intended to. It&#8217;s talking about technology but feels outdated in how it does that. I do think a second pass on the verses would help to remove some of the more old-school terminology and make it feel a bit more timely. Given that it does have an 80s-esque sound, that may be intentional, but as is, I can&#8217;t tell for sure. I also think the chorus\/hook could use something to really make it stand out &#8211; it blends in a bit with what came before musically. Think it&#8217;s nearly there, though!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Bob BirthiselSong: I&#8217;ve Got My TelephoneReviewer: Empty AtlasPositive Comments: That keys solo after the first hook is really fantastic &#8211; I&#8217;d listen back for that alone. Another thing I think you did really well is keep your lyrics rea&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-73256","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/73256","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=73256"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/73256\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":73257,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/73256\/revisions\/73257"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=73256"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=73256"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=73256"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}