{"id":71921,"date":"2020-05-05T11:08:00","date_gmt":"2020-05-05T16:08:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=e09d13bb324f9e1afda2f6929145ed08"},"modified":"2020-05-05T11:08:00","modified_gmt":"2020-05-05T16:08:00","slug":"feel-my-soul-by-toni-fournier-8","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2020\/05\/05\/feel-my-soul-by-toni-fournier-8\/","title":{"rendered":"Feel My Soul by Toni Fournier"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"https:\/\/d3ck8ztij7t71z.cloudfront.net\/192\/192482\/tmb_150x150_192482_283385.jpg\" title=\"Toni Fournier\" alt=\"Toni Fournier\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/tonifournier\">Toni Fournier<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=122365&#038;mediaID=732098\">Feel My Soul<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=122255\">Ashley Martin<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>Excellent job on the melody and rhythms, this song is actually quite catchy. There are a lot of words to your lines and you did an amazing job with your phrasing and timing, everything fits and works! The versus\/chorus\/bridge are very well defined and keeps the ear engaged. Overall very well written and great performance on the vocals\/guitar\/drums. I really enjoyed this song.  <\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>You have a great melody\/chord progression, but I think you could tighten it up on the vocals, making sure you have the same melodic pattern repeating in your lines. There are a few places where in one line your voice goes up and in the next line I&#8217;m expecting\/wanting to hear the same pattern but then your voice will go down on a note. The ear really picks up on these small details and it&#8217;s what makes melody stand out. It&#8217;s a little detail, but would make the whole song just more defined and refined. Keep on writing! Best wishes. <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Toni FournierSong: Feel My SoulReviewer: Ashley MartinPositive Comments: Excellent job on the melody and rhythms, this song is actually quite catchy. There are a lot of words to your lines and you did an amazing job with your phrasing &#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-71921","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/71921","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=71921"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/71921\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":71922,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/71921\/revisions\/71922"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=71921"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=71921"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=71921"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}