{"id":66123,"date":"2019-09-21T07:23:00","date_gmt":"2019-09-21T12:23:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=5e7d9616a3031cdbba936a00cd72c8ba"},"modified":"2019-09-21T07:23:00","modified_gmt":"2019-09-21T12:23:00","slug":"amends-by-marc-s-pate-3","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2019\/09\/21\/amends-by-marc-s-pate-3\/","title":{"rendered":"Amends by Marc S. Pate"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"https:\/\/d3ck8ztij7t71z.cloudfront.net\/98\/98561\/tmb_150x150_98561_201725.jpg\" title=\"Marc S. Pate\" alt=\"Marc S. Pate\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/marcpate\">Marc S. Pate<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=68863&#038;mediaID=731225\">Amends<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=124263\">John Kelly Wilson<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>I think the lyrics are good, and the concept is good. You have talent. But the song needs to go somewhere. It stays in the same place without a hook. So it seems to drag some. But with some work and stepping up the tempo a touch, with a hook, it could be good.<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>Needs a better production. Vocals could be better and song is a little too slow. Needs a better hook because it just stays in the same place. Also, the double tracking of the vocals doesn&#8217;t work well.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Marc S. PateSong: AmendsReviewer: John Kelly WilsonPositive Comments: I think the lyrics are good, and the concept is good. You have talent. But the song needs to go somewhere. It stays in the same place without a hook. So it seems to &#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-66123","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/66123","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=66123"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/66123\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":66124,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/66123\/revisions\/66124"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=66123"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=66123"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=66123"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}