JllVMINVTI<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>I definitely like the arrangement and overall composition of the song structure. But overall, the beat is simple and catchy enough for you to write a better song to hook people. Other than that, great job, you have Great potential. I really liked it, but I am looking at it from the general perspective\/pov. Keep it up!!<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>However, there was no clear structure to the singing, it seemed kinda free-form\/Jazz to me, and there was not a recognizable hook. For this to be Marketable, there needs to be a clear intro, verse\/build-up, and chorus. Maybe a bridge if needed to connect any sections.Trust me, I love the creativity, but I would suggest honing it down and perfecting it into something more structured and palatable to general audiences, if that is your intended audience. One other very important thing: Sound SelectionAll your sounds sounded stock and generic. Although I said there was solid composition and arrangement, the sounds themselves were not at all good. They sounded very “factory-preset” and I could obviously tell you used a drum loop through-out the beat. Invest in a producer that will make you a beat that sounds live and exciting. This beat, while nice, was by no means exciting.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: SernekaSong: Red Ruby SlippersReviewer: JllVMINVTIPositive Comments: I definitely like the arrangement and overall composition of the song structure. But overall, the beat is simple and catchy enough for you to write a better song to h…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-60505","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/60505","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=60505"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/60505\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":60506,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/60505\/revisions\/60506"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=60505"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=60505"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=60505"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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