{"id":56119,"date":"2018-11-14T04:47:00","date_gmt":"2018-11-14T10:47:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=d8c55b2b0164ab809c2c54e9c22468e6"},"modified":"2018-11-14T04:47:00","modified_gmt":"2018-11-14T10:47:00","slug":"lemon-pie-by-charlie-shock-6","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2018\/11\/14\/lemon-pie-by-charlie-shock-6\/","title":{"rendered":"LEMON PIE by Charlie Shock"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"http:\/\/usrimgs.broadjam.com\/14\/14065\/tmb_150x150_14065_121777.jpg\" title=\"Charlie Shock\" alt=\"Charlie Shock\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/charlieshock\">Charlie Shock<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=7448&#038;mediaID=59261\">LEMON PIE<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=120854\">Good Advice<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>This song has potential, but it does have some flaws.<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>First the tempo is wrong, this song actually needs to be sped up a little, not a ton, but it needs to be faster.  Of course if you do that then the fact that you don&#8217;t have any instrumental interludes between lyric sections becomes a real problem as your run time gets way too short.second, this song needs to be sung by a woman, unfortunately a man singing this song just sounds like whining.Third there are lyrical inconsistencies, &#8220;she could make your head spin&#8221; should be &#8220;she could make my head spin&#8221;  The person singing is too focused on what she has done to him to worry about what she does to others.  Every lyric needs to back up that idea of their relationship and not mix other people in there.Please don&#8217;t take these comments negatively, this song HAS market potential, just needs to be cleaned up and a little more work, and a female singer wouldn&#8217;t hurt either.  Keep in mind that is not saying your singing is bad, it is saying your singing is a bad fit for this song when it would be more poignant and marketable coming from a woman.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Charlie ShockSong: LEMON PIEReviewer: Good AdvicePositive Comments: This song has potential, but it does have some flaws.Constructive Comments: First the tempo is wrong, this song actually needs to be sped up a little, not a ton, but i&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-56119","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/56119","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=56119"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/56119\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":56592,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/56119\/revisions\/56592"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=56119"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=56119"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=56119"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}