Jeff Roberts<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>The rolling groove and big sound remind me of 80’s Peter Gabriel (and that’s what Dave Matthews took for a current sound). I really like that groove and heavy bass. The vocals have a good timbre, and some really strong points in the performance.<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>I don’t think the lofi “band’s next door” intro is working that well. Why not come in with a bit of that strong, rolling groove then kick the vocals. The echo repeat of every phrase is overdone I think–maybe save that as a less frequent spice and make it more strategic. You have some off pitch “oh hooo’s” that sound like Eddie Vedder–I’d skip those or make sure they’re on pitch. There are some high pitch sounds that are just fighting the mix and adding harshness, when the basic drum\/bass groove is so pleasing all by itself. I think you need more variety in the chord progression with a B part of the verses and at least a change up in the bridge. Also the lyrics are kinda stuck after the first verse–can you tell more about the situation? This has a very cool vibe and could really grow into a solid tune.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: CAEDMON’S DREAMSong: DevestationReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: The rolling groove and big sound remind me of 80’s Peter Gabriel (and that’s what Dave Matthews took for a current sound). I really like that groove and heavy ba…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-50448","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/50448","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=50448"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/50448\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":50449,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/50448\/revisions\/50449"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=50448"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=50448"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=50448"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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