{"id":46960,"date":"2018-03-20T11:27:00","date_gmt":"2018-03-20T16:27:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=d86b4c1b1b1168e908e30bfbc47d9a4c"},"modified":"2018-03-20T11:27:00","modified_gmt":"2018-03-20T16:27:00","slug":"joy-by-signal-30-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2018\/03\/20\/joy-by-signal-30-2\/","title":{"rendered":"Joy by Signal 30"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"http:\/\/usrimgs.broadjam.com\/6\/6328\/tmb_150x150_6328_264154.jpg\" title=\"Signal 30\" alt=\"Signal 30\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/signal30\">Signal 30<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=2211&#038;mediaID=657912\">Joy<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=114552\">Simon Finn<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>This is a jolly song that has the feel of a novelty pop record.  You have two simple chord patterns that you repeat and that fit together with a different feel which is good.<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>There are two things I would suggest.  Firstly, that you edit this song down.  A pop song in this genre should be between 3 and 4 minutes long (maximum).  Secondly, consider re-working the lyrics.  You have a lot of very obvious rhymes in there and these days, rhymes are much more sophisticated, even in the pop genre.  It seems that you&#8217;ve aimed to rhyme instead of saying what your song is about.  Good luck!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Signal 30Song: JoyReviewer: Simon FinnPositive Comments: This is a jolly song that has the feel of a novelty pop record.  You have two simple chord patterns that you repeat and that fit together with a different feel which is good.Cons&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-46960","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/46960","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=46960"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/46960\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":46961,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/46960\/revisions\/46961"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=46960"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=46960"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=46960"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}