{"id":46759,"date":"2018-03-16T08:05:00","date_gmt":"2018-03-16T13:05:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=f4ba27bd8b384fd3330f55b8542eb44c"},"modified":"2018-03-16T08:05:00","modified_gmt":"2018-03-16T13:05:00","slug":"savior-by-paul-krans-6","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2018\/03\/16\/savior-by-paul-krans-6\/","title":{"rendered":"Savior by Paul Krans"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"http:\/\/usrimgs.broadjam.com\/default.jpg\" title=\"Paul Krans\" alt=\"Paul Krans\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/paulkrans\">Paul Krans<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=82476&#038;mediaID=604475\">Savior<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=114552\">Simon Finn<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>This is quite tricky &#8211; I think the basic rhythmic idea here is quite strong, but the recording quality is very distracting &#8211; its distorted and was clearly mixed over 0db.  The harmonies are also out of tune and the whole arrangement is too busy, so that it&#8217;s pretty much impossible to hear the lyrics.  It&#8217;s all very repetitive so it&#8217;s hard to feel that the song moves along and develops emotionally.<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>Go back to your original idea, which is strong, and create a simpler arrangement, perhaps paying for a pro-demo to see if the potential in the song can be released.  Being a songwriter doesn&#8217;t mean you also have to be singer, mix-engineer, masterer, producer, musician etc&#8230; This can help you keep focus on what you&#8217;re good at.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Paul KransSong: SaviorReviewer: Simon FinnPositive Comments: This is quite tricky &#8211; I think the basic rhythmic idea here is quite strong, but the recording quality is very distracting &#8211; its distorted and was clearly mixed over 0db.  Th&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-46759","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/46759","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=46759"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/46759\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":46760,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/46759\/revisions\/46760"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=46759"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=46759"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=46759"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}