Brenda Craven<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>Really cool groove. I love the feel and rhythm of this piece. You have a great beginning on this song. It is very catchy…the melody is stuck in my head and that’s a really good sign. Strong writing and composition. Great job.<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>As with me, I’m a keyboardist myself. I have realized that you can only do so much with synth, but it is possible to get great sounding compositions with what you have. Most engineers will critique it to pieces but is’s Alright…you use what you have access to. My suggestion(s): 1. The piece sounds very synthy.. Maybe adding some additional instrumentation will help with alleviating some of that. 2. Adding a 4 beat break at :35 and coming back in with some added strings, horns, hi hat, etc will give it a big lift. 3. At some point within this piece, a change in drum and percussion would take away from the monotony of the song and keep the listener intrigued about what’s going to happen next. You have a great piece here: it just needs a little lift and some remixing to bring it to life. Of course live instrumentation would really be great for your piece, but you have a good thing going right now…go with it and make it dynamic. You can do it!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: Josh WalkerSong: Clav AttackReviewer: Brenda CravenPositive Comments: Really cool groove. I love the feel and rhythm of this piece. You have a great beginning on this song. It is very catchy…the melody is stuck in my head and that…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-40640","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/40640","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=40640"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/40640\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":40641,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/40640\/revisions\/40641"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=40640"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=40640"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=40640"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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