{"id":39834,"date":"2017-09-23T08:39:00","date_gmt":"2017-09-23T13:39:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=15f976bf0aca49c711330cd8baf923ce"},"modified":"2017-09-23T08:39:00","modified_gmt":"2017-09-23T13:39:00","slug":"chain-of-sin-arts-version-by-margie-art-corey-s-a-corey","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2017\/09\/23\/chain-of-sin-arts-version-by-margie-art-corey-s-a-corey\/","title":{"rendered":"Chain Of Sin Art’s Version by Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey"},"content":{"rendered":"

\"Margie<\/p>\n

Broadjam Artist: <\/b>Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey<\/a>
Song: <\/b>Chain Of Sin Art’s Version<\/a><\/p>\n

Reviewer: <\/b>Jeff Roberts<\/a><\/p>\n

Positive Comments: <\/b>Very cool minor mood with a Gothic feel. The vocal delivery is very Leonard Cohen. Very artistic effort here with a lot of good things going on. I think the next version will be killer.<\/p>\n

Constructive Comments: <\/b>The bass needs some taming–it’s too rumbly as is and fights your tune. I’d cut the <100K on it and lower the volume and bring the percussion up. That rough hard left sound is cool but doesn't quite translate--it's too rough. I think the vocal should be a less bass heavy and bring it up just a tad. The lyrics may be a bit too cliche in places. I think overall you could glue the arrangement together better, and maybe review the overall structure of the song composition. This would take a serious look to offer specific suggestions. This is really cool work and it's totally worth the extra work to optimize it!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

\"Margie<\/p>\n

Broadjam Artist: <\/b>Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey<\/a>
Song: <\/b>Chain Of Sin Art’s Version<\/a><\/p>\n

Reviewer: <\/b>Jeff Roberts<\/a><\/p>\n

Positive Comments: <\/b>Very cool minor mood with a Gothic feel. The vocal delivery is very Leonard Cohen. Very artistic effort here with a lot of good things going on. I think the next version will be killer.<\/p>\n

Constructive Comments: <\/b>The bass needs some taming–it’s too rumbly as is and fights your tune. I’d cut the <\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-39834","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/39834","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=39834"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/39834\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":39835,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/39834\/revisions\/39835"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=39834"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=39834"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=39834"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}