Kate Carpenter<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>Here’s a poignant break-up song from the male counterpart’s point of view, “It’s lonely out here.” That is well-communicated in this sad song. Forlorn and forsaken, he wonders what went wrong. Sincere vocal with nice piano instrumentation. Mirror\/here – nice rhyme.<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>The vocal is nice, but rather…understated. It almost seems like it would benefit from raising the key, too. Sounds like you’re at the bottom of your range. I could understand all the lyrics, but had to really concentrate to do it. You have a beautiful voice I just wanted to hear more of it. One place where you could have upped the ante was at the end of the bridge on “feeling out here”, add a bit of dramatic “something” to that vocalization. The synth ending didn’t do justice to the song…why not end it with that beautiful piano playing? The lyrics seem a bit repetitious to me. This song needs more specifics, more word pictures and story\/substance than just looking in the mirror. What did he find there when he looked?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: Keith TaylorSong: Lonely Out HereReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: Here’s a poignant break-up song from the male counterpart’s point of view, “It’s lonely out here.” That is well-communicated in this sad song. Forlorn and for…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-39500","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/39500","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=39500"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/39500\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":39501,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/39500\/revisions\/39501"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=39500"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=39500"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=39500"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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