Spitting Lama MIDI<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>This reminds me of ME circa the mid-90s. I love the bass line, that 70s groove, and the simple hook. This has – as the youngsters say – an old-stool vibe. I don’t have the time to collaborate with others these days but, if I did, I’d wanna work on this tune. If I have it here on Broadjam check out my first stab at “Trance”-type genre called Helixism. <\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>I think this could be a 5\/5 with some work. There’s not enough material for the length. But that hook could provide endless material. Try doubling the speed\/halving the note values, maybe alter the pitches, and use that as a counterpoint for development. The low end doesn’t sound right because the bass line is so legato. Add some rests, alter the synths amp envelope with less decay\/release, etc. to make the notes more distinct. Sidechain the kick to the bass so it lowers the bass volume while it’s playing. Try raising the bassline up a couple octaves to make an additional part to add and possibly transpose it more to make it a diatonic harmony part. Do your harmonic changes (:55) more quickly. I I IV I over 8 bars. Or even 4 bars. The solo drums during the break won’t cut it. Use a real fill or breakbeat or percussion loop. In\/Build\/Break\/Bring It\/Mix Out. Bring a new element in (at least) every 16 bars during the build. <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: Signal 30Song: Roll With ItReviewer: Spitting Lama MIDIPositive Comments: This reminds me of ME circa the mid-90s. I love the bass line, that 70s groove, and the simple hook. This has – as the youngsters say – an old-stool vibe. I don’…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-38958","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/38958","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=38958"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/38958\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":38959,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/38958\/revisions\/38959"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=38958"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=38958"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=38958"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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