Drew Hale<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>Really enjoyed the lyrics and the story of this song. The sound and feel reminds me of Stoney Larue, and maybe even Cody Jinks. Even has a little bit of Townes Van Zandt in the lead vocal. Good melody, easy to predict, but not overly predictable. The arrangement I felt worked nicely as a vehicle for the story. You felt the loneliness and longing of the subject, and the absolutely universal feeling of “what if”, from the narrator. I think this one has great potential to be picked up and re-recorded by an act!<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>Constructively, this definitely felt like a demo. The recording was a little rough sonically. but I imagine thats the idea. It feels like a pitch song, and thats great. The lyrics and melody work well together, but the hook didn’t quite grab me. I had to go back and listen a couple of times to remember what it sounded like. The arrangement is nice, and feels good. But it gets a little bit monochromatic after awhile. I feel like this song could use a bit of a tempo boost. I love the somber tone, but it drags just a bit too much for my taste. I think a bit quicker tempo could help move the story a long a bit more. Take a listen to the song “Birds” by Cody Jinks. I think this song could have a feel very similar. Still feeling the somber. melancholy groove. But it drives a little as well. Overall, nice work. I would love to hear more of your songs. Hell, I’d like to PLAY one of your songs. Cheers.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: Michael CreganSong: HUngry and ColdReviewer: Drew HalePositive Comments: Really enjoyed the lyrics and the story of this song. The sound and feel reminds me of Stoney Larue, and maybe even Cody Jinks. Even has a little bit of Townes Va…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-36157","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/36157","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=36157"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/36157\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":36158,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/36157\/revisions\/36158"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=36157"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=36157"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=36157"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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