{"id":35465,"date":"2017-03-11T19:12:00","date_gmt":"2017-03-12T00:12:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=11808d8c819fc80cf73ca308fc57d61f"},"modified":"2017-03-11T19:12:00","modified_gmt":"2017-03-12T00:12:00","slug":"jeanie-by-randal-dunkle-8","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2017\/03\/11\/jeanie-by-randal-dunkle-8\/","title":{"rendered":"Jeanie by Randal Dunkle"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"http:\/\/usrimgs.broadjam.com\/165\/165499\/tmb_150x150_165499_258211.jpg\" title=\"Randal Dunkle\" alt=\"Randal Dunkle\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/randaldunkle\">Randal Dunkle<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=108033&#038;mediaID=700708\">Jeanie<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=107175\">Kathyjo Varco<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>This song has a haunting melody that kind of pulls you in.  reminds me of Elvis Costello in a way. I get where you&#8217;re going with it in terms of the melody and chorus. You&#8217;re in a good spot. Overall I&#8217;d say you&#8217;re 80% there with it. It&#8217;s retro but could possible work in the current market. I wish you all the best and I hope these words gave you some encouragement.<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>The guitar work isn&#8217;t bad but you might consider working on your timing. I think the drum track you used is a little hard to play with. Perhaps you may look into a few programs like Addictive Drums. It will make your life a lot easier when it comes to writing not to mention playing along. I hope these suggestions find you well and I look forward to your next creation. Keep it flowin&#8217;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Randal DunkleSong: JeanieReviewer: Kathyjo VarcoPositive Comments: This song has a haunting melody that kind of pulls you in.  reminds me of Elvis Costello in a way. I get where you&#8217;re going with it in terms of the melody and chorus. Y&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-35465","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/35465","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=35465"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/35465\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":35466,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/35465\/revisions\/35466"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=35465"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=35465"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=35465"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}