Chet Nichols<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>Really a funny and easy-going song. Reminds me a bit of Ray Davies and The Kinks…. Fun groove and I like the idea behind the song and it has a great groove to it. I enjoyed the lead singers lilting voice. There is also a intriguing, fun-loving vibe to the lyrics. All in all, a nifty tune that made me smile and laugh.<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>OK, you see my positive comments, right? There is a LOT going for this song….but I am going to give you my constructive impressions. First of all, this is in NO WAY a Chicago Blues song. It is MUCH More in a New Orelans groove…even dixieland and the instrumentation and arrangement would be brilliant if you steered the song in THAT direction. Clearly, you were having fun making this song, but it really could be a fabulous tune with a better arrangement and a better recording. Of course, perhaps your recording set-up is restricting you. For instance, the drums need to be centered and not planted at 3 o’clock in the right channel. The lead vocal is lost in the mix and needs to be centered, while the background vocals are fun, but very pitchy in a number of places. The instrumentation is very solid but needs to be embellished.So, I am guessing this is a demo of some sort….and I am telling you honestly that, it deserves a really great recording, arrangement and fix the touches mentioned above and you will really have a dy-no-mite song with a lot of potential. I’d think of using a soft dixie-land type horn group in the background….smooth out the background vocals, add a McCartney-like bouncy bass to it and make the tune really swing….and you will drive this song right out of the ballpark.I hope these notes help and inspire you….the song really deserves a hard look at it….oh, yeah, and the end of the song goes on a wee bit too long AFTER you have ended the instrumentation…soft studio noises…Best to you and thanks for sharing……<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. MuthSong: BEFORE THE WORLD STOPS SPINNIN!Reviewer: Chet NicholsPositive Comments: Really a funny and easy-going song. Reminds me a bit of Ray Davies and The Kinks…. Fun groove and I like the idea behind the song and it has…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-34701","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/34701","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=34701"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/34701\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":34702,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/34701\/revisions\/34702"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=34701"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=34701"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=34701"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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