{"id":33602,"date":"2017-01-08T15:09:00","date_gmt":"2017-01-08T21:09:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=504886be5f11658fe084c81a1ab3241a"},"modified":"2017-01-08T15:09:00","modified_gmt":"2017-01-08T21:09:00","slug":"be-my-redeemer-revised-by-marilyn-hall","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2017\/01\/08\/be-my-redeemer-revised-by-marilyn-hall\/","title":{"rendered":"Be My Redeemer-Revised by Marilyn Hall"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"http:\/\/usrimgs.broadjam.com\/168\/168738\/tmb_150x150_168738_261459.jpg\" title=\"Marilyn Hall\" alt=\"Marilyn Hall\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=109702\">Marilyn Hall<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=109702&#038;mediaID=681790\">Be My Redeemer-Revised<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=24409\">Kate Carpenter<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>This is a beautiful Christian song with a believable, passionate, plaintive vocal.  I really like his voice!  Clear and expressive, very honest&#8230;sounds like he really means the prayer &#8220;Be my Redeemer.&#8221;  The chorus is very memorable and reminds me of another hymn, but I can&#8217;t quite put my finger on which one. Careful attention was paid to the lyric writing and it shows.  The simple piano accompaniment suits the song well&#8230;no over-production needed here.  Great job, brother keep up the good work.  <\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>The only pitch issue I heard was &#8220;Come unto me.&#8221;  Can his truth, can his love make me whole?  at .26&#8230;.the song needs a little time\/space there.  You asked a question&#8230;how about a little time to ponder that with some instrumentation or quiet.  The song rushes on too fast at that point, in my opinion.  This is a short song with a long ending.  You have time at the end to &#8220;do more&#8221; with your hook.  If you ever re-visit this song recording-wise, you could ponder making the ending more dramatic, beef it up a little somehow&#8230;just a suggestion.  Key change even?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: Be My Redeemer-RevisedReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: This is a beautiful Christian song with a believable, passionate, plaintive vocal.  I really like his voice!  Clear and expressive, very honest&#8230;sounds&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-33602","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/33602","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=33602"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/33602\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":33603,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/33602\/revisions\/33603"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=33602"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=33602"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=33602"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}