Floyd Kelly<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>Louise, a war-afflicted girl, living in a village in a far away land is wishing for better days. Escaping into the rocky mounts of the village nearby. She’s careful with the jagged edges of weather-torn cliffs. A movie clip comes to mind while listening to this – presented in blue hues with a big war mess. She stands at the edge of a cliff – overlooking a war-torn place full of strife, while dark skies memories of family abound. The vocalist’s taunts in this electro-mystery seep through a mist of a campfires’ smoke flowing through the cold air.<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>There is a big chunk of silence at the end of this recording. I think the vocal on this could be much better and there are pitch problems. I played this three times before reviewing. Noticeable, is the placement of the vocal and sounding flat sonically in parts. I think the instrumention could be more ‘crying’ and ‘swelling’ as this entire piece has a dark quality – so exploit it. I like the faint electro-echoes used to add mystery. There is a thickness in the recording (i.e. muddiness) noticeable in the kick drum. I think with some more work on this in a re-mix would take this to another creative level – captivating and haunting. And, please remember, these are just thoughts of a whimsical hobbit up in the woods who has big hairy feet ok.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: N.Jones, Music Designer (Protilius Productions)Song: Frederickson’s “Finally Found (Protilius mad world remix)”Reviewer: Floyd KellyPositive Comments: Louise, a war-afflicted girl, living in a village in a far away land is wishing for …<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-33044","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/33044","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=33044"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/33044\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":33045,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/33044\/revisions\/33045"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=33044"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=33044"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=33044"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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