{"id":31806,"date":"2016-11-19T13:56:00","date_gmt":"2016-11-19T19:56:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=708f7401828cff19aeb4cdb2265639a2"},"modified":"2016-11-19T13:56:00","modified_gmt":"2016-11-19T19:56:00","slug":"dark-desert-sky-by-margie-art-corey-s-a-corey","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2016\/11\/19\/dark-desert-sky-by-margie-art-corey-s-a-corey\/","title":{"rendered":"Dark Desert Sky by Margie &amp; Art Corey,  S. &amp; A.  Corey"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" style=\"margin-right:15px\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"http:\/\/usrimgs.broadjam.com\/165\/165056\/tmb_150x150_165056_269657.jpg\" title=\"Margie &#038; Art Corey,  S. &#038; A.  Corey\" alt=\"Margie &#038; Art Corey,  S. &#038; A.  Corey\" \/><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=107813\">Margie &#038; Art Corey,  S. &#038; A.  Corey<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=107813&#038;mediaID=685699\">Dark Desert Sky<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=108849\">Cat Lamondt<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>Nice melody, lyrics are very workable and with a little polish it could become a great hit song! Well done. Great job overall. Depending on what the song is intended for this is a song that could easily lean itself to numerous opportunities. Good job! Keep writing and composing. Lovely vocal for this genre.<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>I suggest a more definite difference between verse and chorus. As a personal preference I like a 60% vocal, 40% instrumentation sound on country music because the lyrics and storyline is so important. When there is space for an instrumental solo, I would suggest that it would enhance the song but not compete with the vocal. Sometimes with a song such as this I believe that less is more when it comes to the arrangement. If an instrument doesn&#8217;t have a specific purpose rather leave it out.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" align=\"left\" border=\"0\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" src=\"http:\/\/usrimgs.broadjam.com\/165\/165056\/tmb_150x150_165056_269657.jpg\" title=\"Margie &amp; Art Corey,  S. &amp; A.  Corey\" alt=\"Margie &amp; Art Corey,  S. &amp; A.  Corey\"><\/p>\n<p><b>Broadjam Artist: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=107813\">Margie &amp; Art Corey,  S. &amp; A.  Corey<\/a><br \/><b>Song: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/songs.php?artistID=107813&amp;mediaID=685699\">Dark Desert Sky<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Reviewer: <\/b><a href=\"http:\/\/www.broadjam.com\/artists\/home.php?artistID=108849\">Cat Lamondt<\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Positive Comments: <\/b>Nice melody, lyrics are very workable and with a little polish it could become a great hit song! Well done. Great job overall. Depending on what the song is intended for this is a song that could easily lean itself to numerous opportunities. Good job! Keep writing and composing. Lovely vocal for this genre.<\/p>\n<p><b>Constructive Comments: <\/b>I suggest a more definite difference between verse and chorus. As a personal preference I like a 60% vocal, 40% instrumentation sound on country music because the lyrics and storyline is so important. When there is space for an instrumental solo, I would suggest that it would enhance the song but not compete with the vocal. Sometimes with a song such as this I believe that less is more when it comes to the arrangement. If an instrument doesn&#8217;t have a specific purpose rather leave it out.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-31806","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/31806","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=31806"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/31806\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":31807,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/31806\/revisions\/31807"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=31806"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=31806"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=31806"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}