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Broadjam Artist: <\/b>B. Greg Colburn Jr.<\/a> Reviewer: <\/b>Jeff Roberts<\/a><\/p>\n Positive Comments: <\/b>Gorgeous guitar intro! And the vocal performance is just as good. Both have superb engineering. What a great vocal performance and voice. You’ve got a tremendous mood and evocative lyrics going. Think of what Sturgill Simpson would do with this…<\/p>\n Constructive Comments: <\/b>I’d skip the second phase of the guitar intro where it gets busier. It makes it too long and you don’t want to introduce too much side theme. Overall I’d back off the busy guitar work and focus on chords & strumming to allow the song to prevail (of course your picking is very good). “come alive” the melody\/phrasing\/singing drops off a bit. I’d rework that to make it stronger. same with that phrase after “the place is gone”. I think you need a bridge and a chorus sections in G to bring a big lift, using harmony vocals and a female voice in the harmony. This is a fantastic start. I’d like to provide the chorus & bridge parts if you’re interested. Actually I’d like to produce and arrange another version of this…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" Broadjam Artist: <\/b>B. Greg Colburn Jr.<\/a>
Song: <\/b>Far From Home<\/a><\/p>\n<\/p>\n
Song: <\/b>Far From Home<\/a><\/p>\n