Snowy Mountain Stream by Patrick E. Muth

Patrick E. Muth

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth
Song: Snowy Mountain Stream

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey, S. & Al Corey

Positive Comments: Like the sound of the intro guitar………..like the jazz feel, very Hep!! I would like the vocal to be just a tad more out front! Somewhat hard to understand the lyrics…but they sound interesting!! Sounds a little like Mr. Hendrix, can’t get any better than that!! Great Job my friend!!! Let’s hear more!!! Wowza!!!

Constructive Comments: Maybe put the lead vocal out front a little more, love to know what you are saying in your Kool composition!! Love to hear more!! Keep up the HOT Music!!!

Patrick E. Muth

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth
Song: Snowy Mountain Stream

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey, S. & Al Corey

Positive Comments: Like the sound of the intro guitar………..like the jazz feel, very Hep!! I would like the vocal to be just a tad more out front! Somewhat hard to understand the lyrics…but they sound interesting!! Sounds a little like Mr. Hendrix, can’t get any better than that!! Great Job my friend!!! Let’s hear more!!! Wowza!!!

Constructive Comments: Maybe put the lead vocal out front a little more, love to know what you are saying in your Kool composition!! Love to hear more!! Keep up the HOT Music!!!

Rainy day in Basingstoke by Cec Cain

Cec Cain

Broadjam Artist: Cec Cain
Song: Rainy day in Basingstoke

Reviewer: Husky Records LLC

Positive Comments: Dude is original with his style & lyrics. Good ish. Respect.

Constructive Comments: The instruments so a little out dated. No disrespect either. Other than that it’s a go.

Cec Cain

Broadjam Artist: Cec Cain
Song: Rainy day in Basingstoke

Reviewer: Husky Records LLC

Positive Comments: Dude is original with his style & lyrics. Good ish. Respect.

Constructive Comments: The instruments so a little out dated. No disrespect either. Other than that it’s a go.

Earth to Angel by Vicki Lee

Vicki Lee

Broadjam Artist: Vicki Lee
Song: Earth to Angel

Reviewer: CAEDMON’S DREAM

Positive Comments: * unique lead vocals* song has memorable chorus/hook* lyrics have a strong universal message * simple instrumentation & nice chord changes* could be a movie “message” piece

Constructive Comments: + production is clear but mono track stereo sound-field can help each instrument stand out+ doubled vocals loses clarity in lyric at times+ chorus vocal is strong: but a unique instrumental part or lead-line to go along with chorus would help it stand apart from rest of the song

Vicki Lee

Broadjam Artist: Vicki Lee
Song: Earth to Angel

Reviewer: CAEDMON’S DREAM

Positive Comments: * unique lead vocals* song has memorable chorus/hook* lyrics have a strong universal message * simple instrumentation & nice chord changes* could be a movie “message” piece

Constructive Comments: + production is clear but mono track stereo sound-field can help each instrument stand out+ doubled vocals loses clarity in lyric at times+ chorus vocal is strong: but a unique instrumental part or lead-line to go along with chorus would help it stand apart from rest of the song

Wide Awake by FRED GROSS

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSSSong: Wide AwakeReviewer: Husky Records LLCPositive Comments: YESSSSSSS! I’m relaxing diggin’ the smooth vibes. Record sounds great. Keep em comin’ my friend. Constructive Comments: Theirs nothing constructive to say this is …

FRED GROSS

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: Wide Awake

Reviewer: Husky Records LLC

Positive Comments: YESSSSSSS! I’m relaxing diggin’ the smooth vibes. Record sounds great. Keep em comin’ my friend.

Constructive Comments: Theirs nothing constructive to say this is a great song. You guys just keep playing.

Nothing’s Safe and Sound by Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren HeinSong: Nothing’s Safe and SoundReviewer: CAEDMON’S DREAMPositive Comments: * Keyboards and vocals stand out* String lines are clear and lush* A “Disney” musical feel* Nice performance and production!Constructive Comments: + A…

Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Nothing’s Safe and Sound

Reviewer: CAEDMON’S DREAM

Positive Comments: * Keyboards and vocals stand out* String lines are clear and lush* A “Disney” musical feel* Nice performance and production!

Constructive Comments: + Adding one more musical element in the bridge (ex. bass, cymbal rolls, or other) could help it stand out+ non-diatonic chord change in piano intro threw me off (not really there in verse or chorus is it?)+ key modulation could be effective for last chorus melody line stays constant and can get repetitive+ very nice tempo change for ending+ I like this piece alot, I hope my comments don’t sound negative.

Waiting by Richard Walker

Broadjam Artist: Richard WalkerSong: WaitingReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: Really nice baritone vocals that remind me of Ron Sexsmith, as does the song. Maybe Rufus Wainwright a bit too. Good production, playing, and arrangement. You’ve bo…

Richard Walker

Broadjam Artist: Richard Walker
Song: Waiting

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Really nice baritone vocals that remind me of Ron Sexsmith, as does the song. Maybe Rufus Wainwright a bit too. Good production, playing, and arrangement. You’ve borrowed The Beatles’ “Listen” in the progression which will make it familiar but not so close that it’s a copy.

Constructive Comments: The bass is overpowering with a loud low end. It needs to be backed down and thinned out a bit.

Redefined (Radio Edit) by Adam Avery

Adam Avery

Broadjam Artist: Adam Avery
Song: Redefined (Radio Edit)

Reviewer: CAEDMON’S DREAM

Positive Comments: * beautiful lead and backing vocals* lyric has a strong universal message* 12/8 feel flows & builds throughout* Be lifted up with this song!

Constructive Comments: + no intro (even 2 bars can set mood/feel etc)+ drums come in nicely on chorus but the sound quality changes (like a lower quality mp3 track) + nice guitar fills throughout+ fades out too fast

Adam Avery

Broadjam Artist: Adam Avery
Song: Redefined (Radio Edit)

Reviewer: CAEDMON’S DREAM

Positive Comments: * beautiful lead and backing vocals* lyric has a strong universal message* 12/8 feel flows & builds throughout* Be lifted up with this song!

Constructive Comments: + no intro (even 2 bars can set mood/feel etc)+ drums come in nicely on chorus but the sound quality changes (like a lower quality mp3 track) + nice guitar fills throughout+ fades out too fast

Hold The Mic Down – Tha Bishop featuring Phaze Seven & Daz Jones by Husky Records LLC

Husky Records LLC

Broadjam Artist: Husky Records LLC
Song: Hold The Mic Down – Tha Bishop featuring Phaze Seven & Daz Jones

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: I was going to say the backing instrumentals sound like a stereo playing in the background, but then it kicks in with real sound. This is very heavy and ominous, and the groove is really catchy. Very effective. I’m not current on Rap but this reminds me a lot of Ludacris (first voice).

Constructive Comments: Niggas, violence, and alpha male law of the jungle essence throughout the lyrics. Yeah it’s what sells but is it lifting the people up? That’s a philsophical critique. Musically this is solid.

Husky Records LLC

Broadjam Artist: Husky Records LLC
Song: Hold The Mic Down – Tha Bishop featuring Phaze Seven & Daz Jones

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: I was going to say the backing instrumentals sound like a stereo playing in the background, but then it kicks in with real sound. This is very heavy and ominous, and the groove is really catchy. Very effective. I’m not current on Rap but this reminds me a lot of Ludacris (first voice).

Constructive Comments: Niggas, violence, and alpha male law of the jungle essence throughout the lyrics. Yeah it’s what sells but is it lifting the people up? That’s a philsophical critique. Musically this is solid.

Breathe On Me. by Janet Murphy

Broadjam Artist: Janet MurphySong: Breathe On Me.Reviewer: Tristyn LeachPositive Comments: lovely ballad. great vocals. musically very nice with the keyboard and guitar parts. very nice song all the way through. very enjoyable meaningful and dreamyCons…

Janet Murphy

Broadjam Artist: Janet Murphy
Song: Breathe On Me.

Reviewer: Tristyn Leach

Positive Comments: lovely ballad. great vocals. musically very nice with the keyboard and guitar parts. very nice song all the way through. very enjoyable meaningful and dreamy

Constructive Comments: nothing to add it. i personally really liked it

Feels real to me by Tommy Stewart

Broadjam Artist: Tommy StewartSong: Feels real to meReviewer: Marc S. PatePositive Comments: Very tasty guitar tone and sound, nicely done.Constructive Comments: It’s very good, and you are certainly a player but, as an instrumental, it needs a hook or…

Tommy Stewart

Broadjam Artist: Tommy Stewart
Song: Feels real to me

Reviewer: Marc S. Pate

Positive Comments: Very tasty guitar tone and sound, nicely done.

Constructive Comments: It’s very good, and you are certainly a player but, as an instrumental, it needs a hook or something to come back to, otherwise it sounds kind of like a long jam.