Transcendence-EDM by Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: Transcendence-EDMReviewer: Nigel BarrettPositive Comments: Please tell me what equipment you use! Love the sounds! You have a great ear for variation and when less is more – that’s a rare thing.Constructive Comments: …

Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Transcendence-EDM

Reviewer: Nigel Barrett

Positive Comments: Please tell me what equipment you use! Love the sounds! You have a great ear for variation and when less is more – that’s a rare thing.

Constructive Comments: None to add dude! Loved it.

California by CAEDMON’S DREAM

Broadjam Artist: CAEDMON’S DREAMSong: CaliforniaReviewer: Osea CodegaPositive Comments: I liked the voice solo very much, nice melodies here catchy and pleasant.Constructive Comments: Keep up the good work. I left the lyric rate blank because I don’t s…

CAEDMON'S DREAM

Broadjam Artist: CAEDMON’S DREAM
Song: California

Reviewer: Osea Codega

Positive Comments: I liked the voice solo very much, nice melodies here catchy and pleasant.

Constructive Comments: Keep up the good work. I left the lyric rate blank because I don’t speak English and I cannot understand every word as I’m not English native…

Only the rocks live forever by Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal DunkleSong: Only the rocks live foreverReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: Sweet Jane tuned into Sweet Jesus! Nice vibe and really strong lyrics on this one Randall. The “Only the rocks forever” refrain gives it a nice li…

Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Only the rocks live forever

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Sweet Jane tuned into Sweet Jesus! Nice vibe and really strong lyrics on this one Randall. The “Only the rocks forever” refrain gives it a nice lift, and that’s a very strong hook.

Constructive Comments: Make the lead guitar tone sweet and smooth–it’s really harsh at the moment. The bass is distorted and I think it’s too busy–if you settle in and play with the drums/beat more than the guitar I think you’ll be amazed at the space and groove that creates. I will produce this for you if you like Randall–I’d love to show you how much things can come around with simple changes.

Double Wide by Billy Pilgrim

Broadjam Artist: Billy PilgrimSong: Double WideReviewer: Rin VinsonPositive Comments: Wow…Epic piece here. Excellent job all the way around. In a word, I would say muscular. All instrumentation was composed appropriately and everything compliments on…

Billy Pilgrim

Broadjam Artist: Billy Pilgrim
Song: Double Wide

Reviewer: Rin Vinson

Positive Comments: Wow…Epic piece here. Excellent job all the way around. In a word, I would say muscular. All instrumentation was composed appropriately and everything compliments one another seamlessly. The horns and the percussion section push hard while the strings create an anticipation of something large on its way. I visualize a scene in a tv show or movie where people, animals, cars etc…are running away from something large and menacing. The composition, recording, mix, and master are all 100% professionally done. Thanks for sharing.

Constructive Comments: Nothing negative to say here. The piece should do well. I really enjoy quality compositions and recordings and this delivers on all fronts. Thanks for sharing and good luck with it.

Something Inside Of Me by Steve Dafoe – Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – SongwriterSong: Something Inside Of MeReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: Great intro that calls both Tom Petty’s Free Fallin’ and Allmans’ Melissa to mind–then you bring vocals in right on cue. Clean and powerful …

Steve Dafoe - Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Something Inside Of Me

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Great intro that calls both Tom Petty’s Free Fallin’ and Allmans’ Melissa to mind–then you bring vocals in right on cue. Clean and powerful vocals that are given lots of space and hold up to the challenge! Incredibly pleasing vocal timbre and a very convincing emotional performance. This kinda song could help a lot of guys get married if it were playing in the truck. This is one of the best voices out there. Great bridge that really lifts.

Constructive Comments: beautiful eye–heyes I’d recommend not making two syllables out of ‘eyes’ I think it’s awkward and weak. Great as is but I’d love to hear what it’d sound like with a chord walk up on “then I saw you” I think that would kill. “It’s just something…inside of me” is good but not great, when you really want great at that moment.I’m not a hitmaker in Nashville but I’d really like to work on the lyrics/phrasing and chord structure with you to see if I could make this better.It’s freakin’ awesome regardless. Nice work!

Cookie Cutter Blonde instrumental by Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren HeinSong: Cookie Cutter Blonde instrumentalReviewer: Rin VinsonPositive Comments: This song is definitely high energy. The composition, recording, mix, and master are all top grade and professional.I hear a heavy late 70’s early…

Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Cookie Cutter Blonde instrumental

Reviewer: Rin Vinson

Positive Comments: This song is definitely high energy. The composition, recording, mix, and master are all top grade and professional.I hear a heavy late 70’s early 80’s New York influence in the composition. There is a gigantic fan base for this music today and I would think a composition like this would do very well in a TV show, movie, and or ad that might require this type of high energy music for the sound track. Vinyl is a show that comes to mind. The guitar playing is excellent and the tones are not too bright which is usually the pitt-fall that people fall into while trying to pay homage to this genre. Great Job!

Constructive Comments: NO critique here. This is a well done piece of music and great to have in any library. I enjoyed listening to it and I appreciate you sharing it. Pro all the way.

Haywire by Michael Patrick Hogan

Broadjam Artist: Michael Patrick HoganSong: HaywireReviewer: John HazlettPositive Comments: An excellent piece that could be used in a chase scene in a movie.Constructive Comments: Keep all the music score, but to do this piece justice, it needs a live…

Michael Patrick Hogan

Broadjam Artist: Michael Patrick Hogan
Song: Haywire

Reviewer: John Hazlett

Positive Comments: An excellent piece that could be used in a chase scene in a movie.

Constructive Comments: Keep all the music score, but to do this piece justice, it needs a live orchestra.

Praises & Promises / Country Religious by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Praises & Promises / Country Religious

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I like the lead vocals and the sound of the drums and the keyboards as well – sounds a little like the Davy Jones of the Monkees.

Constructive Comments: Not a lot of negatives, I do think this song would sound better with a Saxophone solo instead of the keyboards – best wishes!

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Praises & Promises / Country Religious

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I like the lead vocals and the sound of the drums and the keyboards as well – sounds a little like the Davy Jones of the Monkees.

Constructive Comments: Not a lot of negatives, I do think this song would sound better with a Saxophone solo instead of the keyboards – best wishes!