Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: My Little Girl
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This opens up sounding very much like Ryan Adams’ “New York, New York”. This sounds better with each listen. Really really strong writing in terms of structure, melody, and lyrics. Very nice vocal performance. I really like the chord lift on the pre chorus–it’s a great setup for the chorus/refrain.
Constructive Comments: Listen closely to Ryan Adams’ “New York, New York” for comparison against a masterpiece. First thing drop the effects on the rhythm guitar and go for nice clean, warm sound, and add or substitute and jangly, strumming acoustic guitar part. I think the bass is too plonk plonk plonk in the verses–it sounds like Boston’s “Long Time”, which was 40 years ago. Having it groove and gently move would add a lot. I’d take most of the slapback off the lead vocal, and put some tube drive and just the tiniest bit of distortion in to give it some grit. There’s a bit too much low mid in the vocal–it accentuates the somewhat nasal tone you have. I really don’t like the solo guitar at all. It’s trying to hard, and putting too much Dickie Betts intensity. And the sound is harsh. Simpler, major pentatonic with a smooth tone would be better.All IMO and all intended to help with the tune. This is really solid writing, playing, and singing!
Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Cookie Cutter Blonde instrumental
Reviewer: Rin Vinson
Positive Comments: This song is definitely high energy. The composition, recording, mix, and master are all top grade and professional.I hear a heavy late 70’s early 80’s New York influence in the composition. There is a gigantic fan base for this music today and I would think a composition like this would do very well in a TV show, movie, and or ad that might require this type of high energy music for the sound track. Vinyl is a show that comes to mind. The guitar playing is excellent and the tones are not too bright which is usually the pitt-fall that people fall into while trying to pay homage to this genre. Great Job!
Constructive Comments: NO critique here. This is a well done piece of music and great to have in any library. I enjoyed listening to it and I appreciate you sharing it. Pro all the way.
Broadjam Artist: Patti and Beau Burt, Kim Kelley
Song: I’VE BEEN AWAY FROM LOVE TOO LONG bluegrass version
Positive Comments: Playful and bouncy country thingie, pleasantly acoustic, and acoustically pleasant. Pleasant female voice and pleasant banjo. Did I say pleasant?
Constructive Comments: Maybe just a little shorter, but not, it’s just me, of course, impatiently impatient.
Broadjam Artist: Michael Patrick Hogan
Reviewer: John Hazlett
Positive Comments: An excellent piece that could be used in a chase scene in a movie.
Constructive Comments: Keep all the music score, but to do this piece justice, it needs a live orchestra.
Broadjam Artist: MELVIN BARHAM
Song: WORLD DANCE
Reviewer: Richie Sings
Positive Comments: Creative beat.
Constructive Comments: I want to listen to so much more from who ever made this beat. You have talent and that’s my oppinion.
Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Praises & Promises / Country Religious
Reviewer: Randal Dunkle
Positive Comments: I like the lead vocals and the sound of the drums and the keyboards as well – sounds a little like the Davy Jones of the Monkees.
Constructive Comments: Not a lot of negatives, I do think this song would sound better with a Saxophone solo instead of the keyboards – best wishes!
Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: RIDE THOSE HORSES (new mix)
Reviewer: Richie Sings
Positive Comments: I like your voice alot.
Constructive Comments: The quality is bold to me.
Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Just Another Day
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth
Positive Comments: i like the combination of instruments. the voice sounds nice with the tone used. great start and come in. nice job on that.
Constructive Comments: I think a better mix would suit this. you have some good horses here, worth a little more feed. not that it will do well as it is. the voice is close enough to pass, but Melo-dyne used at about 75% would make this smash in my opinion.Am I ever satisfied? No. No. No. It’s what music teacher do, it’s what my two piano teacher Aunts did to me. They refused to give you a perfect score. I hated them for it then, but now I realize that they loved me so much they wanted me to be perfect–for real. Straight Ahead Brother! catnip pat
Broadjam Artist: Randy Calligan
Song: Pick Up My Heart And Go Home
Reviewer: Marc S. Pate
Positive Comments: Beautiful voice, tasty piano, and nice changes. Strings too!
Constructive Comments: I have nothing here and bow down, you are a true artist.
Broadjam Artist: Richard Walker
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth
Positive Comments: ok nice start. tell the truth. nice job on pretty much anything.
Constructive Comments: Good Work. Keep On Truckin. I would have liked a break in the middle of this song. think about it. take it off down the highway and then back to the trail of love. Keep That Musical River Flowin, We’re ALL listening!===========================catnip pat========================