Lonely Out Here by Keith Taylor

Keith Taylor

Broadjam Artist: Keith Taylor
Song: Lonely Out Here

Reviewer: Ross Mabey

Positive Comments: I think that you need to articulate (words were sometimes difficult to understand) more. Also the length of the song was too short for commercial radio.

Constructive Comments: Perhaps you could use more emotional words “heart broken”, “my world fell apart” and say how upset you were. Otherwise it sounds as though you’ll just move on to the next relationship. I know its only a song but what went wrong with the relationship?

The Ride Home by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: The Ride Home

Reviewer: Jeff Maguire

Positive Comments: Gives a sense of gentle contemplation and relaxation, I’d say there’s definitely a market for it.

Constructive Comments: If I had some criticism it would be the instrumentation as a whole is not great, and there’s some spots where the drums might be a tad out or just very static. In the purest commercial environment I don’t know if this is much of an issue as the overall feeling does come through, and this is consistent with a lot of what is out there. Good luck with it.