Washing Hands by Lonnie G

Broadjam Artist: Lonnie GSong: Washing HandsReviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: good singer, good lyricsConstructive Comments: your main issue is the quality of the instrument tones and and performances, the drums are Ok but that guitar tone is …

Lonnie G

Broadjam Artist: Lonnie G
Song: Washing Hands

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: good singer, good lyrics

Constructive Comments: your main issue is the quality of the instrument tones and and performances, the drums are Ok but that guitar tone is awful, it sounds like a bad digital tone and the the mix needs work, the bass needs to come up in the mix, and the song needs to be mastered, its not compressed.

Beating Heart by Serneka

Broadjam Artist: SernekaSong: Beating HeartReviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: good singer!, Constructive Comments: The quality of your instruments needs some work, the whole rhythm section is kinda thin and weak, and the arrangement is a little…

Serneka

Broadjam Artist: Serneka
Song: Beating Heart

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: good singer!,

Constructive Comments: The quality of your instruments needs some work, the whole rhythm section is kinda thin and weak, and the arrangement is a little monotonous, You need some changes and dynamics, slow down on the vocals a little, your singing too much for the song you need to leave some space.

From Jesus To Geronimo by Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: From Jesus To GeronimoReviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: good signing, good instrumentation , performances, not a bad recordingConstructive Comments: I guess my main problem here is the lyrics, I don’t disli…

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: From Jesus To Geronimo

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: good signing, good instrumentation , performances, not a bad recording

Constructive Comments: I guess my main problem here is the lyrics, I don’t dislike them but the song starts out with, they raped my mother and killed my dad? wow, your just not going to find a lot of places to use something that harsh , that’s pretty hardcore!

Oh Yeah by Fred Kimmel

Broadjam Artist: Fred KimmelSong: Oh YeahReviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: interesting effects and arrangement, not a bad performance by the various performersConstructive Comments: Your main problem , which seems to be quite common is the reco…

Fred Kimmel

Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Oh Yeah

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: interesting effects and arrangement, not a bad performance by the various performers

Constructive Comments: Your main problem , which seems to be quite common is the recording quality, you need a better engineer, all your interments are sitting up the middle in the same place on top of each other, you need to spread them out and use the STEREO, and the EQ needs some work and the compression, this song hasn’t been mastered and the volumes are jumping all over the place.

Paint and Spackle by Signal 30

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30Song: Paint and SpackleReviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: well the instrumentation is done well, not a bad recordingConstructive Comments: My main problem here is two fold, the lyrical content, I’m just not sure about p…

Signal 30

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Paint and Spackle

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: well the instrumentation is done well, not a bad recording

Constructive Comments: My main problem here is two fold, the lyrical content, I’m just not sure about paint and sparkle? not sure what it means? and the singer just isn’t very good, I’m afraid you just need to work on your vocal abilities more. But hey, I say that and I know I’m not a very good singer which is why I make instrumental music so I’m not being a snob, i can’t sing either. this would actually make a good retro instrumental piece for a comedy movie.

The Mommy Song by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: The Mommy SongReviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: fun song, great message, love the kidsConstructive Comments: recording quality needs some work, you need a better engineer and I think it would help to have a …

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: The Mommy Song

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: fun song, great message, love the kids

Constructive Comments: recording quality needs some work, you need a better engineer and I think it would help to have a few more instruments , maybe a shaker and a violin or some keys or something.

Harley’s In Heaven by Chris Ford

Broadjam Artist: Chris FordSong: Harley’s In HeavenReviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: Great song, great performancesConstructive Comments: Maybe work on the recording quality a bit, just the mastering, but heck, not much wrong with this tune. l…

Chris Ford

Broadjam Artist: Chris Ford
Song: Harley’s In Heaven

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: Great song, great performances

Constructive Comments: Maybe work on the recording quality a bit, just the mastering, but heck, not much wrong with this tune. love your voice!

A Reason – by Serneka

Broadjam Artist: SernekaSong: A Reason -Reviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: Good funky rhythm, good performers, some good vocals here and there,Constructive Comments: The main thing here is the recording quality, some of the vocals are little fla…

Serneka

Broadjam Artist: Serneka
Song: A Reason –

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: Good funky rhythm, good performers, some good vocals here and there,

Constructive Comments: The main thing here is the recording quality, some of the vocals are little flat and lacking intensity, lack luster. But mostly the EQ is way fat and tubby and instruments are all crowded together in the same space, like everything is right up the middle, and there needs to be some reverb on one or two things to create some space. You need a better engineer

ANSWER MAN by MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGBSong: ANSWER MANReviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: Not bad recording quality, with some exceptions, The drummer is good and the instrumentation seems together.Constructive Comments: Sorry but I think the song needs work. The…

MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ANSWER MAN

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: Not bad recording quality, with some exceptions, The drummer is good and the instrumentation seems together.

Constructive Comments: Sorry but I think the song needs work. The vocalist probably isn’t going to be famous but the they suffice., A little out of pitch, But hey, I can’t sing either so I’m not trying to be a snob, In fact my own singing is pretty bad and I still try so what the heck. The lyrics are a little odd and I’m not sure what the song is about?, the vocals also need some engineering help, a little reverb or something, they don’t sound like they’re in the song, they sit way on top. The mix needs some work too its a little crowded and the EQ is a little tubby. The song needs some dynamic changes , things that start and stop, volume changes etc.

Black-Hearted Cowboy by Ashley Martin

Broadjam Artist: Ashley MartinSong: Black-Hearted CowboyReviewer: Barry OsbournPositive Comments: Good singer, appropriate for country. good instrument performancesConstructive Comments: The main thing wrong with the song is the recording is the quali…

Ashley Martin

Broadjam Artist: Ashley Martin
Song: Black-Hearted Cowboy

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: Good singer, appropriate for country. good instrument performances

Constructive Comments: The main thing wrong with the song is the recording is the quality of recording. It needs to be remastered and the EQ worked on. Its tubby in the 400 range and some of the instruments need a little more space on them and the whole thing is a little crowded. You need a better engineer.