Leave Ohio Behind by Bob Birthisel

Broadjam Artist: Bob BirthiselSong: Leave Ohio BehindReviewer: dolylamby’s possePositive Comments: Really a cool song. Well done production too. Nice vocals.Constructive Comments: About the only thing I would suggest would be to not repeat the second…

Bob Birthisel

Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: Leave Ohio Behind

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Really a cool song. Well done production too. Nice vocals.

Constructive Comments: About the only thing I would suggest would be to not repeat the second verse again in the third verse. Use that last verse to finish your story and not just fill in the space… Why’d you leave Ohio? What now? How’s it end?Really liked “no one’s gonna find my tracks/Gonna cover them in time.”

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