Long Lonely Night by Derrick Procell

Broadjam Artist: Derrick ProcellSong: Long Lonely NightReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocal. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals. 1) Does my intro make yo…

Derrick Procell

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: Long Lonely Night

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocal. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? no 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? Somewhat maybe with different with a musical hook

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? longing for lost love 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Somewhat maybe with different with a musical hook

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