COLD LONELY HOUSE by MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGBSong: COLD LONELY HOUSEReviewer: Randall MarkPositive Comments: Love the soft guitar strumming and soulful vocals in the verses. Thought the production and performances top notch, pro. Good song structure and I like the final choru…

MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: COLD LONELY HOUSE

Reviewer: Randall Mark

Positive Comments: Love the soft guitar strumming and soulful vocals in the verses. Thought the production and performances top notch, pro. Good song structure and I like the final chorus at end that is contrasted from the other choruses

Constructive Comments: Maybe the lyrics could he into some more specifics in the verses, such as maybe talking about the swing in the backyard under an oak tree where something special (that your lyrics express) happened And that way I think he could’ve painted picture more of the house and the emotions and brought the Listener vividly inside of the house. I think one lyric mentioned something like “in every room you did or said something special”. Forgive me if I am misquoting that but the idea that n that lyric is general. I think instead if you relate a specific memory that happened so you take the listener there instead of a general statement that “special things happened or were said”. I hope that makes sense?Overall good song!

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