Reviewer: Phil Bouldry
Positive Comments: Alliteration in the title is always a hook, I think. And to have it in the chorus is good. The theme of the lyric is unique and interesting. Who hasn’t gotten a call selling windows or vacations? Haha you should put one in about expiration of car warranty! The saxophones just make this song! The sax instrumental parts elicit visions of film noir scenes of shadowy figures in the night. Cigarette smoking detectives in fedoras on clandestine meetings. The sax trills at the end are great. I wish the bass was a little more “bassy”. But it does drive the song very well. The singer’s voice is unique sounding.
Constructive Comments: There are a couple places in the lyric where it feels like you’re trying to stuff too many syllables into the measure.