Animal(vocals by Bead) by Tommy Stewart

Broadjam Artist: Tommy StewartSong: Animal(vocals by Bead)Reviewer: Rob ReamsPositive Comments: pretty good, I like the feel of thisConstructive Comments: not much to say, maybe pay closer attention to syllables and small words that kill a verse. like …

Tommy Stewart

Broadjam Artist: Tommy Stewart
Song: Animal(vocals by Bead)

Reviewer: Rob Reams

Positive Comments: pretty good, I like the feel of this

Constructive Comments: not much to say, maybe pay closer attention to syllables and small words that kill a verse. like the part with the zoo rhyme. I find words that rhyme with to don’t flow and stick out like a soar thumb sometimes.

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