Positive Comments: I really love the voice of the girl. I like the track in general also. It’s a vocal house music, not electropop, though
Constructive Comments: So, the thing there is some catchy hooks. But the arrangement is too simple. Consider finding another timbre for a bass or change it as the song develops. Regarding lead synths – on my taste, they are a bit out fashioned and sound very 90s. However, consider adding some other synths as a layer, it may help. the development and structure is good in overall, but the song is too long. Try to make a 3 minutes version with all the best that you have in 5-minutes one.