Emperor of China / Soundtrack by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt ClodsSong: Emperor of China / SoundtrackReviewer: Jeana PotthoffPositive Comments: I liked the mix of instruments you chose. I also liked the theme at 1:00.Constructive Comments: I would bring in the t…

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Emperor of China / Soundtrack

Reviewer: Jeana Potthoff

Positive Comments: I liked the mix of instruments you chose. I also liked the theme at 1:00.

Constructive Comments: I would bring in the theme a little sooner and maybe tighten up the transitions.

Children of the World by Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)Song: Children of the WorldReviewer: Greg JohnsonPositive Comments: This is REALLY REALLY GOOD!!! Beautiful production, great vocal, and a really enjoyable listen in every way!! Sounds completely pro to m…

Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: Children of the World

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: This is REALLY REALLY GOOD!!! Beautiful production, great vocal, and a really enjoyable listen in every way!! Sounds completely pro to me in every way! LOVE IT!!

Constructive Comments: Nothing to change here!! Take care. Greg

Meditacion En Alfa (Alpha Meditation) by RICARDO ALONSO

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSOSong: Meditacion En Alfa (Alpha Meditation)Reviewer: Greg JohnsonPositive Comments: I love this!!! Sounds like Pink Floyd in the Wish You Were Here era!! Great recording/playing/production! Everything done just rig…

RICARDO ALONSO

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Meditacion En Alfa (Alpha Meditation)

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: I love this!!! Sounds like Pink Floyd in the Wish You Were Here era!! Great recording/playing/production! Everything done just right!!

Constructive Comments: I would not change a thing!! GREAT!! Take care. Greg

Imprisonment by Distorted Waves

Broadjam Artist: Distorted WavesSong: ImprisonmentReviewer: Greg JohnsonPositive Comments: Immediately catchy…..great riff!! Musicianship is tight, and arrangement works great! Really interesting style…..hard rock meets Reggae! Really wel…

Distorted Waves

Broadjam Artist: Distorted Waves
Song: Imprisonment

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Immediately catchy…..great riff!! Musicianship is tight, and arrangement works great! Really interesting style…..hard rock meets Reggae! Really well done on all fronts!!

Constructive Comments: I think the vocal could be slightly up in the mix, and maybe mixed in a little grittier way. Great stuff!! Take care. Greg

Just Another Day by Marc S. Pate

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. PateSong: Just Another DayReviewer: Delta Burnett ReedPositive Comments: This had a soothing sound….vocal clear….background music fits the songConstructive Comments: sometimes I felt there were parts that could have used a …

Marc S. Pate

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Just Another Day

Reviewer: Delta Burnett Reed

Positive Comments: This had a soothing sound….vocal clear….background music fits the song

Constructive Comments: sometimes I felt there were parts that could have used a harmony part to off set the many words that seem to have the same note?…I can’t quite put my finger on what was missing in those parts..did you write the song and music? I hope this is a help….I am not an engineer so can’t give you specifics, but only what my ear hears…but good luck with this.

My Angel (Folk, Country – Alternative) by Steve Dafoe – Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – SongwriterSong: My Angel (Folk, Country – Alternative)Reviewer: Delta Burnett ReedPositive Comments: Such a nice story of a mother? and wife?…Nice… I can feel the mans love for the woman who gives her love to the ones…

Steve Dafoe - Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: My Angel (Folk, Country – Alternative)

Reviewer: Delta Burnett Reed

Positive Comments: Such a nice story of a mother? and wife?…Nice… I can feel the mans love for the woman who gives her love to the ones she loves. Nice job, clear vocal, pleasant guitar. Glad she is not taken for granted….Good luck with this….had to wipe a tear away.

Constructive Comments: Well done in its simplicity….nothing extra needed.

Time With You by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: Time With YouReviewer: Delta Burnett ReedPositive Comments: Kate you always give us such a song that gives a lesson that one can understand… simple but direct…vocal is very clear, guitar is flawless… You took …

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Time With You

Reviewer: Delta Burnett Reed

Positive Comments: Kate you always give us such a song that gives a lesson that one can understand… simple but direct…vocal is very clear, guitar is flawless… You took me back to a certain campsite in a N H woods and lake…

Constructive Comments: I have nothing that would make this any better than it is…On one of your albums?

56 Still Upright Album: 13. Broken Dream Confessor – N by StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecordsSong: 56 Still Upright Album: 13. Broken Dream Confessor – NReviewer: Delta Burnett ReedPositive Comments: Jay I really like this singer he has such a cowboy sound that i just love…Everything about this song makes me …

StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: 56 Still Upright Album: 13. Broken Dream Confessor – N

Reviewer: Delta Burnett Reed

Positive Comments: Jay I really like this singer he has such a cowboy sound that i just love…Everything about this song makes me think of so many lives are like this, the curves life throws at some people…This is a job well done

Constructive Comments: For a guitar and vocal this is well done, have no issue with the way this song was done.

(collab) RAVEN PGOlach/Rurack/JTB by Peter G Olach – PGO

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGOSong: (collab) RAVEN PGOlach/Rurack/JTBReviewer: Delta Burnett ReedPositive Comments: This is one of my all time favorites….Peter this is so good the story line is so good there is a movie that this song reminds me…

Peter G Olach - PGO

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: (collab) RAVEN PGOlach/Rurack/JTB

Reviewer: Delta Burnett Reed

Positive Comments: This is one of my all time favorites….Peter this is so good the story line is so good there is a movie that this song reminds me of…She was a hawk and and he was a wolf and the only time they could see each other as human was dawn, midieval story. this song would be so appropriate for this. I so love this song…well done my friend

Constructive Comments: I can find no fault with this song.

ANSWER MAN by MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGBSong: ANSWER MANReviewer: Ghost Sin MusicPositive Comments: The track is mixed very well and the opening instrumentation sets a great tone and encourages the ears to stay tuned for something good! Nive solid guitar work, clean no ov…

MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ANSWER MAN

Reviewer: Ghost Sin Music

Positive Comments: The track is mixed very well and the opening instrumentation sets a great tone and encourages the ears to stay tuned for something good! Nive solid guitar work, clean no overplaying really nice!

Constructive Comments: The song could easily be a five-star track but in my opinion, could use a couple of arrangement adjustments. The first verse lyrically is not as strong as the later verses. I might just move that verse to the middle and bury it a little or go for a rewrite. The other verses are cool and sound well thought out. The first chorus or “prechorus” (tell me why, tell me why) would sound better using the same vocal technique as the real chorus or eliminated altogether and replaced with a guitar lick mimicking the chorus melody, just something to tease the chorus. The song drags a bit when the guitar changes the rhythm in the last section. It really isn’t necessary as the hook is very excellent and holds up all on its own. A suggestion would be to drop the guitar out of the mix in this section and set a dynamic using only bass and drums under the chorus. Then a pick slide on the four count and let ‘er rip! Great job with this track!!