Mothers of Messy Kids, Unite! by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: Mothers of Messy Kids, Unite!Reviewer: Bobby CaputoPositive Comments: Female Tom Lehrer….some very good moments….best line was “Put all your DVD’s back in their cases and Hang up your towels in proper places” I …

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Mothers of Messy Kids, Unite!

Reviewer: Bobby Caputo

Positive Comments: Female Tom Lehrer….some very good moments….best line was “Put all your DVD’s back in their cases and Hang up your towels in proper places” I would’ve added a “the” there…but, it was still very visual. The song is filled with imagery anyone can relate to….well maybe not my wife…she’s horsey…I’m the Felix Unger in this family…lol

Constructive Comments: think you went a bridge too far…..didn’t need the extra verse….could’ve taken the less contrived and put together as there’s no real timeline here…throw out the lines that aren’t as solid.

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