Reviewer: Who Is DC
Positive Comments: It sounds like he had a couple great instruments in here. It would be great if he would of worked on the arrangement just a bit more.
Constructive Comments: Arrangement could have been better in my opinion that’s whats bothering me about this particular track. but I like where he or she was going with the track it would of been great if the arrangement had more direction and feel to it. Try counting like a songwriter does with bars and it can go beyond what you can imagine. also add a little more effects or something too