Stand by Diana Rasmussen

Broadjam Artist: Diana RasmussenSong: StandReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: This is really pretty piano + vocal song that proclaims hope: We will get through life’s storms with God’s help. Vocal is sung with passion and believe-ability. Si…

Diana Rasmussen

Broadjam Artist: Diana Rasmussen
Song: Stand

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: This is really pretty piano + vocal song that proclaims hope: We will get through life’s storms with God’s help. Vocal is sung with passion and believe-ability. Simple instrumentation totally works for this track. Nicely done!

Constructive Comments: If there was anything you could work on (in my humble opinion) it would be the way the marriage of the lyric and melody work together. The song needs to flow more effortlessly…I’m looking for a smooth connectedness that would make the song so much better.Verse one: Who are you going to forgive anyway? What is the antecedent of who?

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