TENDER HEARTED MEM’RIES by Marilyn Hall

Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: TENDER HEARTED MEM’RIES

Reviewer: Randy Steward

Positive Comments: Fiddle is a nice touch, blends well with the other instruments. I can’t put a specific artist on your voice or style but it reminds me of general earlier classic entertainers. The waltz/3/4 beat is also reminiscent of an earlier era.

Constructive Comments: I had a bit of a problem finding the hook and deciding on a title for this song. Musically, it had me waiting for more variation. Vocally it maybe could use some more rhythm pattern changes. Lyrically it’s a simple tune and not bad by any means but I felt some stronger maybe even harsher words were needed. Dig in emotionally. Say how it really is and how you feel!

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