Reviewer: Randy Steward
Positive Comments: Good basic feel, easy listening progression yet it gets a bit repetitious. Maybe an instrument change or lead line variation would keep it moving forward. I named it “on a breeze” due to the ‘flowing rhythm and beat’. A definite “hook” pattern would help with the variety of the music. Throw in some light and airy lyrics and you’ve got it. It’s a good start…my opinion as always!
Constructive Comments: I guess I put the constructive suggestions in the first section of the review. I gave it a 3 as far as overall, you’re on the right track but add some variation in either music pattern or rhythm, lead line and create an actual ‘hook’ even though it’s only a ‘tune’ at this point.