Out Of The Equation by Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob BentleySong: Out Of The EquationReviewer: MGBPositive Comments: Really cool story song with clever lyrics and an important message. Sounds very much like a rocking Kenny Rogers. Very well put together piece and the guitar solo real…

Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Out Of The Equation

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Really cool story song with clever lyrics and an important message. Sounds very much like a rocking Kenny Rogers. Very well put together piece and the guitar solo really rocks.

Constructive Comments: Really good song.

Out Of The Equation by Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob BentleySong: Out Of The EquationReviewer: MGBPositive Comments: Really cool story song with clever lyrics and an important message. Sounds very much like a rocking Kenny Rogers. Very well put together piece and the guitar solo real…

Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Out Of The Equation

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Really cool story song with clever lyrics and an important message. Sounds very much like a rocking Kenny Rogers. Very well put together piece and the guitar solo really rocks.

Constructive Comments: Really good song.

I’ll Take a Step by Kate Carpenter

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: I’ll Take a Step

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Good music production, really fine guitar work, excellent vocals, nice religious tune, all well done musically! Could be a camp song for a religious retreat, I can see younger children sitting around a campfire singing this tune!

Constructive Comments: Nope, all & all this is musically sound………

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: I’ll Take a Step

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Good music production, really fine guitar work, excellent vocals, nice religious tune, all well done musically! Could be a camp song for a religious retreat, I can see younger children sitting around a campfire singing this tune!

Constructive Comments: Nope, all & all this is musically sound………

I’ll Take a Step by Kate Carpenter

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: I’ll Take a Step

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Good music production, really fine guitar work, excellent vocals, nice religious tune, all well done musically! Could be a camp song for a religious retreat, I can see younger children sitting around a campfire singing this tune!

Constructive Comments: Nope, all & all this is musically sound………

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: I’ll Take a Step

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Good music production, really fine guitar work, excellent vocals, nice religious tune, all well done musically! Could be a camp song for a religious retreat, I can see younger children sitting around a campfire singing this tune!

Constructive Comments: Nope, all & all this is musically sound………

Jon Penny by Ken Lehnig

Broadjam Artist: Ken LehnigSong: Jon PennyReviewer: MGBPositive Comments: Incredibly well done story song. Instrumentation is haunting and arrangement and production are excellent. Lyrics are super cool.This is like Dylan meets Pink Floyd, and you can’…

Ken Lehnig

Broadjam Artist: Ken Lehnig
Song: Jon Penny

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Incredibly well done story song. Instrumentation is haunting and arrangement and production are excellent. Lyrics are super cool.This is like Dylan meets Pink Floyd, and you can’t get much better than that.

Constructive Comments: Great effort!

Jon Penny by Ken Lehnig

Broadjam Artist: Ken LehnigSong: Jon PennyReviewer: MGBPositive Comments: Incredibly well done story song. Instrumentation is haunting and arrangement and production are excellent. Lyrics are super cool.This is like Dylan meets Pink Floyd, and you can’…

Ken Lehnig

Broadjam Artist: Ken Lehnig
Song: Jon Penny

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Incredibly well done story song. Instrumentation is haunting and arrangement and production are excellent. Lyrics are super cool.This is like Dylan meets Pink Floyd, and you can’t get much better than that.

Constructive Comments: Great effort!

Your Eyes, My Only Universe by Ionut Mirel Udrea

Broadjam Artist: Ionut Mirel UdreaSong: Your Eyes, My Only UniverseReviewer: Wayne NeilsonPositive Comments: Nice instrumentation Good forward momentumNice melodic ornamentationContrasting harmonies and sections worked wellOverall, a nice piece, that c…

Ionut Mirel Udrea

Broadjam Artist: Ionut Mirel Udrea
Song: Your Eyes, My Only Universe

Reviewer: Wayne Neilson

Positive Comments: Nice instrumentation Good forward momentumNice melodic ornamentationContrasting harmonies and sections worked wellOverall, a nice piece, that could be used in travel marketing ads, reminiscing ads

Constructive Comments: Maybe lay drums back into the mix a tadMain melody on Piano – maybe quantise to 90% or so to give more realistic performanceGreater use of dynamic range in phrases and sectionsMaybe a few sections with differing instrumentation and/or playing techniques/textures (reduce to create some space) especially in latter part, which will help to build a nice climax as you return to original

Sail by Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: SailReviewer: Wayne NeilsonPositive Comments: Overall, Guitar playing style was pleasing albeit a little repetitive in articulation style. Sounds a bit like some early Fleetwood Mac guitar playing. Constructive Comme…

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Sail

Reviewer: Wayne Neilson

Positive Comments: Overall, Guitar playing style was pleasing albeit a little repetitive in articulation style. Sounds a bit like some early Fleetwood Mac guitar playing.

Constructive Comments: Use dynamic contrasts for variety if the playing articulation style is to remain the same. Use slight rubato at times for contrastRall. at end to signal finish of songRe-edit audio to reduce unwanted sounds (e.g. string slides)Maybe some harmonic notes at the ends of some pertinent phrases

Sail by Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: SailReviewer: Wayne NeilsonPositive Comments: Overall, Guitar playing style was pleasing albeit a little repetitive in articulation style. Sounds a bit like some early Fleetwood Mac guitar playing. Constructive Comme…

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Sail

Reviewer: Wayne Neilson

Positive Comments: Overall, Guitar playing style was pleasing albeit a little repetitive in articulation style. Sounds a bit like some early Fleetwood Mac guitar playing.

Constructive Comments: Use dynamic contrasts for variety if the playing articulation style is to remain the same. Use slight rubato at times for contrastRall. at end to signal finish of songRe-edit audio to reduce unwanted sounds (e.g. string slides)Maybe some harmonic notes at the ends of some pertinent phrases