I’ll Take a Step by Kate Carpenter

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: I’ll Take a Step

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Good music production, really fine guitar work, excellent vocals, nice religious tune, all well done musically! Could be a camp song for a religious retreat, I can see younger children sitting around a campfire singing this tune!

Constructive Comments: Nope, all & all this is musically sound………

I’ll Take a Step by Kate Carpenter

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: I’ll Take a Step

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Good music production, really fine guitar work, excellent vocals, nice religious tune, all well done musically! Could be a camp song for a religious retreat, I can see younger children sitting around a campfire singing this tune!

Constructive Comments: Nope, all & all this is musically sound………

Your Eyes, My Only Universe by Ionut Mirel Udrea

Ionut Mirel Udrea

Broadjam Artist: Ionut Mirel Udrea
Song: Your Eyes, My Only Universe

Reviewer: Wayne Neilson

Positive Comments: Nice instrumentation Good forward momentumNice melodic ornamentationContrasting harmonies and sections worked wellOverall, a nice piece, that could be used in travel marketing ads, reminiscing ads

Constructive Comments: Maybe lay drums back into the mix a tadMain melody on Piano – maybe quantise to 90% or so to give more realistic performanceGreater use of dynamic range in phrases and sectionsMaybe a few sections with differing instrumentation and/or playing techniques/textures (reduce to create some space) especially in latter part, which will help to build a nice climax as you return to original

Sail by Jeff Ashbaker

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Sail

Reviewer: Wayne Neilson

Positive Comments: Overall, Guitar playing style was pleasing albeit a little repetitive in articulation style. Sounds a bit like some early Fleetwood Mac guitar playing.

Constructive Comments: Use dynamic contrasts for variety if the playing articulation style is to remain the same. Use slight rubato at times for contrastRall. at end to signal finish of songRe-edit audio to reduce unwanted sounds (e.g. string slides)Maybe some harmonic notes at the ends of some pertinent phrases

Sail by Jeff Ashbaker

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Sail

Reviewer: Wayne Neilson

Positive Comments: Overall, Guitar playing style was pleasing albeit a little repetitive in articulation style. Sounds a bit like some early Fleetwood Mac guitar playing.

Constructive Comments: Use dynamic contrasts for variety if the playing articulation style is to remain the same. Use slight rubato at times for contrastRall. at end to signal finish of songRe-edit audio to reduce unwanted sounds (e.g. string slides)Maybe some harmonic notes at the ends of some pertinent phrases