Dance Pop One (Production-Electronica, Electronica) by Steve Dafoe – Songwriter

Steve Dafoe - Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Dance Pop One (Production-Electronica, Electronica)

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: good overall production, good choice of sounds, song is catchy, has good beat, optimistic, danceable, interesting guitar soloing at end. Although there is no tempo change, variation in percussion sounds makes the song not boring but consider some fills or percussion tempo changes

Constructive Comments: beside I wrote above no mcons

Cecil’s Wedding (featuring Sali Oguri) by Fred Kimmel

Fred Kimmel

Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Cecil’s Wedding (featuring Sali Oguri)

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: good overall production, good choice of sounds. song is catchy, good beat interestin guitar soloing.

Constructive Comments: I feel a change in percussion, specially tempo and some fills cound enhace the song, would not make it predictable

Cecil’s Wedding (featuring Sali Oguri) by Fred Kimmel

Fred Kimmel

Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Cecil’s Wedding (featuring Sali Oguri)

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: good overall production, good choice of sounds. song is catchy, good beat interestin guitar soloing.

Constructive Comments: I feel a change in percussion, specially tempo and some fills cound enhace the song, would not make it predictable

NOT GUILTY (work in progress) by Earl.C.Webb

Earl.C.Webb

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: NOT GUILTY (work in progress)

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: Good overall production ,good choice of sounds. Song is catchy, with interesting guitar soloing.

Constructive Comments: I was f a change in percussion, via fills or change in tempo but did not occur, that would make the song not so predictable and would enhance it.

NOT GUILTY (work in progress) by Earl.C.Webb

Earl.C.Webb

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: NOT GUILTY (work in progress)

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: Good overall production ,good choice of sounds. Song is catchy, with interesting guitar soloing.

Constructive Comments: I was f a change in percussion, via fills or change in tempo but did not occur, that would make the song not so predictable and would enhance it.

Story Songs: Ghost (She is Calling) by Nick Fuse

Nick Fuse

Broadjam Artist: Nick Fuse
Song: Story Songs: Ghost (She is Calling)

Reviewer: Paige Stroman

Positive Comments: Beautiful instrumentation ang guitar work. I would like an instrumental version of this with more layers

Constructive Comments: I really couldn’t understand the lyrics. The vocals seemed buried in the mix. They need to be brought forward for the listeners to hear the words.

Story Songs: Ghost (She is Calling) by Nick Fuse

Nick Fuse

Broadjam Artist: Nick Fuse
Song: Story Songs: Ghost (She is Calling)

Reviewer: Paige Stroman

Positive Comments: Beautiful instrumentation ang guitar work. I would like an instrumental version of this with more layers

Constructive Comments: I really couldn’t understand the lyrics. The vocals seemed buried in the mix. They need to be brought forward for the listeners to hear the words.