OLD SKIN by Earl.C.Webb

Earl.C.Webb

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: OLD SKIN

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: I loved the tender tone of the song, you have a very nice voice.This was just a guitar version, but it would sound great produced. pretty song

Constructive Comments: It needs to be 2 speeds faster, it drags in a few places , causing the listner to tune out. This is clearly just a guitar version, but it would need guitars and instruments to feel in the spces of the music. I could not understand the vocals in places, so work on a nice clear vocal. it has poetential, just needs little tweaking. Good Luck.

OLD SKIN by Earl.C.Webb

Earl.C.Webb

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: OLD SKIN

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: I loved the tender tone of the song, you have a very nice voice.This was just a guitar version, but it would sound great produced. pretty song

Constructive Comments: It needs to be 2 speeds faster, it drags in a few places , causing the listner to tune out. This is clearly just a guitar version, but it would need guitars and instruments to feel in the spces of the music. I could not understand the vocals in places, so work on a nice clear vocal. it has poetential, just needs little tweaking. Good Luck.

No Holds Barred by Introducing Mister Frisky

Introducing Mister Frisky

Broadjam Artist: Introducing Mister Frisky
Song: No Holds Barred

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This almost sounds like a Stanley Clarke & Jeff Beck collaboration. There’s cool & innovative stuff here.

Constructive Comments: The drum/percussion track is very chirpy and there’s no real solid groove to get into. What if you slowed it down about 4bpm and tried to make it slinkier?

No Holds Barred by Introducing Mister Frisky

Introducing Mister Frisky

Broadjam Artist: Introducing Mister Frisky
Song: No Holds Barred

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This almost sounds like a Stanley Clarke & Jeff Beck collaboration. There’s cool & innovative stuff here.

Constructive Comments: The drum/percussion track is very chirpy and there’s no real solid groove to get into. What if you slowed it down about 4bpm and tried to make it slinkier?

Zombified by Ron D Bowes

Ron D Bowes

Broadjam Artist: Ron D Bowes
Song: Zombified

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This has a QOTSA kinda energy and a biting, angry lyric & vocal performance. This is very original in approach and it’s interesting. And I think there’s potential to be really cool too…

Constructive Comments: Drums should come in at :25. There’s too much time in the intro without having a groove. I’d dial back on the delay on the vocal. And then when the groove comes in I think it should be straight rather than coming on the and. The drums are so trebly with no kick to hear and high hat sibilance that’s hard to listen to.

Zombified by Ron D Bowes

Ron D Bowes

Broadjam Artist: Ron D Bowes
Song: Zombified

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This has a QOTSA kinda energy and a biting, angry lyric & vocal performance. This is very original in approach and it’s interesting. And I think there’s potential to be really cool too…

Constructive Comments: Drums should come in at :25. There’s too much time in the intro without having a groove. I’d dial back on the delay on the vocal. And then when the groove comes in I think it should be straight rather than coming on the and. The drums are so trebly with no kick to hear and high hat sibilance that’s hard to listen to.

Love Is In The Things I Do by Bob Bentley

Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Love Is In The Things I Do

Reviewer: Mary P. Carter

Positive Comments: The vocal presentation was excellent….good voice. The pitch was good. The instrumentation was appropriate and I liked the chord progression and arrangement.There is good marriage between the music and lyrics.

Constructive Comments: The meter may have been a bit slow. Try speeding it up just a tad and see what you think. That would also bring the total time below the 4:10 which is just a little long. Overall… I like the artist’s sound and would like to listen to more songs.

Love Is In The Things I Do by Bob Bentley

Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Love Is In The Things I Do

Reviewer: Mary P. Carter

Positive Comments: The vocal presentation was excellent….good voice. The pitch was good. The instrumentation was appropriate and I liked the chord progression and arrangement.There is good marriage between the music and lyrics.

Constructive Comments: The meter may have been a bit slow. Try speeding it up just a tad and see what you think. That would also bring the total time below the 4:10 which is just a little long. Overall… I like the artist’s sound and would like to listen to more songs.