Reviewer: amy abernathy
Positive Comments: The guitar playing was good, but needed a little more variation to see the diffrence in chorus and verse. You are a very good guitar player.It has an old school feel to it.
Constructive Comments: It needs veriation, there were not big changes to show where a chorus would go and to seperate the verse. Maybe change the rhytem slightly on the chorus. As a lyrict, it would be hard to know where every thing goes. I do think you are a fantastic guitar player, it just needed a little better structure. keep playing you are talented.