Positive Comments: The song has a nice melody.
Constructive Comments: Some of the instruments were not tuned properly and I kept hearing jarring notes when the guitar and bass played the same note at the same time. You folks can play, but you really need to get those instruments tuned up. Whoever mixed it should have picked up on it right away. I would like to hear more from you because you have talent, but I don’t feel that this song is of good enough quality to present to a music supervisor.