Positive Comments: This song is really well done. The vocal is right on and the instrumentation and arrangement is tight. The theme of having a relationship falling apart and the desire to make it good again is universal and should resonate with the listeners. I could easily see this one on the radio or in a film or TV show if you can find the right person to pitch it to.
Constructive Comments: I didn’t see any weakness in this song. The lyrics were well crafted and the singer’s voice had just the right break in it to make the listener feel that she meant every word of it. Keep up the good work, folks.