Loyalty by Bart

Bart

Broadjam Artist: Bart
Song: Loyalty

Reviewer: David James

Positive Comments: Nice intro..I like the bass and drum beginning. The keyboard tone works really well. The lyrics are clever, but see Constructive Comments. The singer is perfect for the ambience of the song. The song is catchy. Nicely recorded. This song could have been recorded by Gruppo Sportivo.

Constructive Comments: I didn’t get the ‘Larty’ thing, maybe that’s just me and for that reason I marked down the lyrics by one mark. I would have liked the guitar to have been more prominent in the mix. The bridge between 2.25 and 2.56 and the outro need more musical variation to add dynamism in my opinion. I think with some tweaking this could be a very strong song.

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